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LIMBO LOVE
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LIMBO LOVE |
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Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA 
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LIMBO LOVE My love now resides in Limbo. Away from all prying eyes. No one to pour it out on, And no one to hold loves ties. Here in Limbo it's settled. Never again to fly free or soar. It was brushed away by the wind, Not wanted, not needed anymore. It found a place deep within. Inside of a dark lurking void. In there it will survive and there it won't be destroyed. My limbo love will live on, But only as a comfort to me. But God, it had so much to give, And now no one will ever see. * That which gives light, must endure burning * |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Kitty** - I have a feeling that someone will see, and it will not stay in limbo... BC |
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*Stubby* Member
since 2002-09-19
Posts 122 |
very nice ***S*** J |
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Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA |
Bill, You may be right!! Lets hope! BTW: I'm really not all doom and gloom. I have a very up beat sense of humor... I love to laugh! It seems that this type of writing is what I do best. Thanks for reading... Kitty |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is so sad and wistful. I'm glad it's not you. Well done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kitty, you wrote this very well, ev en though it was sad. I'm glad that it wasn't you that you were talking about... "Love makes the world go around" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very melancholic |
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