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vandana
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0 posted 2003-01-11 12:08 PM


WIll this day never end?
Shall I say the same
WIll be tomorrow for us
Don't want this day
To end
Let our love grow
And more each day come
If the day comes to end
We should say goodbyes
And leave
On our ways
Should I take your name?
While you are away
At the end of day
I will remember you
And say It's waasn't
easy on us
To leave
On sperate ways
At the end
We will know why?

[This message has been edited by vandana (01-11-2003 12:09 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-01-11 12:34 PM



Ah Vandana...this speaks from the heart...
I hope you are well, my dear, and that
nothing is broken!  

K

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2 posted 2003-01-11 12:35 PM


vandana...a subject I know well..leaving, ending...sad write
garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-01-11 12:42 PM


Vandana,
I also hope all is well with you.....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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4 posted 2003-01-11 04:58 PM


Yes, take his name and carry it with you for your lifetime...
there are reasons why love ends as it does
but don't go searching for them.

I truly believe it's all part of God's plan~

Peace to you vandana~

zenny
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5 posted 2003-01-11 05:02 PM


a heartfelt write vandana, very nice

The greatest thing u'll ever learn
is just to love
and be loved
in return

*hugs* Kelly.

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6 posted 2003-01-11 05:50 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Yes, carry this name with you on and on as you can identify the people you meet along the way so much more and learn and grow wiser by the minute! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ThisDiamond
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7 posted 2003-01-11 09:13 PM


Hang in there my friend. ThisDiamond
Bill Charles
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8 posted 2003-01-11 09:38 PM


vandana - you said it well, best to you...

BC

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