Open Poetry #24 |
I Thirst for Your Tears |
Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Each tear wept, was once a raindrop, that helped fill the lakes, ponds and sea. So now it will return to clouds, recycled tears of you and me. You’ve wept my tears, I’ve wept your own. Each time we thirst, we all drink tears. We drink the tears and weep them, too, of those now dead ten thousand years. The scientists are quick to say, that water cannot multiply. Each drop’s been here since creation. Even Jesus was known to cry. Some tears flow in a mountain stream and some are waves that lick the shore. Some are a summer thunderstorm. So many are wept by the poor. But tears of joy are the best and bring the eyes such loveliness. No tear is wasted, it returns. sometimes it does so in a kiss. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Beautiful words Michael. Very soft and tender...well done.. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes again a cycle we are a part of ... very nicely written..I enjoyed the thoughts..as well as the words |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Michael, Wise and sweet...enjoyed. Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ahhh Michael, this is really lovely. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Michael, this is so sweet...so loving and tender. Joy tears really are good ones, aren't they? "Love makes the world go around" |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Lovely write, Michael. Sandra |
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Rainbowdust Member
since 2002-12-05
Posts 320Sydney, Australia |
I loved this poem Michael; it's a keeper for sure! The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Beautiful message, Michael! Your gentle and wise spirit shines through in your words. It would be an honour to keep this in my library~ Take care m'friend Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Beautifully worded thoughts. Michael, yes, I too believe that tears never really disappear, but are recycled, and that we are all interconnected in time, space, and thought. Thanks for this post, it will find a nice home in my library. Peace. Namaste. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very beautiful poem Michael. Much enjoyed the read.... ~Hugs & Smiles~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Very tender write...unique look at the cycle of tears. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssssss) Oh Michael, this is so very true, sweet friend, sadly after crying so many of these tears I've been crying cold ones this past week! (sad sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is heartfelt, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love this! what a concept! |
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angelfriend Member
since 2003-01-11
Posts 52Michigan USA |
Oh, I love this poem!! I have cried many a teary raindrop myself. Tears do serve many purposes and they do come from the soul. Thanks for this interesting look at them. "The only gift is a portion of thyself" - Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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