Summer's Breeze - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #24

Summer's Breeze

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2003-01-10 10:13 AM

Summer just began
Let start
All over again
Our days has come to enjoy
Let us hold hands
And let new day
Began to glow
See how river flows
When the love just began
We just began this day
So let us pray
And wait
Till our love end
We can find the answers
In this summer breeze
All the flowers that
were fallen on the ground
Make me realise
How my memories that I spent
On summers with you

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

1 posted 2003-01-10 10:15 AM

Indeed - Summer is the most flourishing time of year - in many ways... Lovely thoughts, vandana..

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2003-01-10 10:55 AM

enjoyed.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2003-01-10 11:27 AM

candid camera
in heaven
with sound that is felt

cool view here

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-01-10 11:32 AM

Vandana, this is beautiful. Thank you for sharing your memories with us...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2003-01-11 05:15 AM

(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Vandana, I wish for true love to come your way and comfort you like the zephyr, sweet friend, you are so deserving of this gentle beauty, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-01-11 01:17 PM

love the opening lines!

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

7 posted 2003-01-11 04:31 PM

Very nice ...

Hugs, Marti

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

8 posted 2003-01-11 06:09 PM

thanks for a summer breeze blowing by, its
damp, dark and cold in NJ right now

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.