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Open Poetry #24

Moonlight Never Faulters

ambermize
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 157
California

0 posted 2003-01-10 01:18 AM

The moonlight never faultered,
As it glazed across your skin,
Losing myself inside you,
The perfection of a sin.

Colors swirl and magnify,
All the tender words you speak,
Slipping without circumstance,
Into the beauty that you keep.

Connections of the softest kind,
Still live within my soul,
Smiles that held a promise,
That I was to affraid to show.

Even now I think of you,
As time grows thick inside,
Everything I feel for you,
Impossible, to leave behind.

[This message has been edited by ambermize (01-10-2003 01:23 AM).]

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2003-01-10 01:27 AM

You express the disappointment of broken promises very well.

So sad but nicely done.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

2 posted 2003-01-10 01:31 AM

Felt every word, loves are lost but never forgotten.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-01-10 02:14 AM

I know...well done write!

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