Open Poetry #24 |
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Restless Night |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Listen for the silence, But I heard the city noise, Calmly with patience Waiting for the din to break Yet it continues. Sirens scream into the dark, Run down avenues A parade of flashing noise. No quiet defense To their meaning of terror, Pillows are no barrier. Gloom |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
I hate the sound of sirens. Conjures up all kinds of thoughts, if I let it, depending where I am and who is where. warm regards, Pat ![]() ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Auguste![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Sounds like a rough night. That's why I don't like living in a city, but rather out in the country. Pleasant dreams! ![]() The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
There is nothing worse than a restless, sleepless night. Sirens and barking dogs...grrr. Good write. Chris ![]() "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Excellent poetry...short, but very poignant. I especially liked the lines "No quiet defense To their meaning of terror, Pillows are no barrier" --Pillows are indeed no barrier to the horrors of the world. Thank you for sharing. *Krista Knutson* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
makes me think of that song by Canned Heat, "Goin' Up The Country"...whatcha think? |
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