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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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Musical notes play in the background like a favorite song turned down low humming the words I've never written. Sweeping your hands across the keys keeping tempo to the beat caught up in the melody. Your breath breathes a fluted pitch just out of range, so close to my lips recorded in my dreams ~dreaming you~ [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (01-10-2003 02:18 AM).] |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh so nice to read your words which of course are simply "dreamy" and so beautifully constructed in this poem. ~ The soul lies buried in ink that does not flow ~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Mysteria, I am so pleased to see you here. Thank you ever so much for reading. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Lori, this is so beautiful, sweet friend, this made me cry as I miss love and how it sung to me like a music box! (sigh) I wish for this love to awlays shine, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
schweeeeeeeeeeet dreams!!! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
sweetest are the dreams of the one yuove never met |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
a lady with love socks on her bare feet wearing the warm with free toes.. it don't get any better enjoyed this bluezy.. waycool D |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
BluesSerenade A lovely write, enjoyed. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Lori, this is beautiful. I enjoyed reading....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
sweet dreams are made of these....who in the world would disagree... I'm singing it to you incase you didn't recognize the tune  A most lovely soft write!! ~Salty |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Bluesy, Must have got here late, I can only echo all of the above. Sheesh, Ed. Brrr! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
HUgssss you...I too, am stopping in late....always enjoy the words you pen.....  L~ I sing to life |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
girl you can dream one heck of a poem... or is that you write one heck of a dream? Enjoyed.... but you knew that didn't you? |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A wonderfully lyrical poem... much enjoyed.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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