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Silly Unrelated Senyru
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Silly Unrelated Senyru |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Silly, Unrelated Senyru snow sky waits, on hold, its breath in pause, a clause of adept magnitude ©January 9, 2003 slurp the last sip up try not to slip up, morning coffee rocks your socks ©January 9, 2003 carpet leaves, fall’s linger evidence the time of year garden rake’s full waste ©January 9, 2003 almost still shadows move with clock’s tick-tock, hour’s hand sound of one, clapping ©January 9, 2003 I’ll call it quits, friend, before I’ve fried your brain’s guard, its virus scan, Man! ©January 9, 2003 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Virginia, I really thank you for these senryu's. as you kno, I love them, but still don't know all the tecniques of writing them. If you don't mind, I'm going to keep them so I can study the way you did them. I don't think you will mind....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
After all that of telling you, I forgot to check to save....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
gg, senyrus are probably among the easiest to do because they're 3 lines of 5 syllables, 7 syllables, and 5 syllables. different from haiku, they can be about anything and include personification, similes, and metaphors haiku must be about nature, cannot have personification, simile or metaphor, and should have a twist in the last line Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautifully done! Charisma |
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