Open Poetry #24 |
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wet with my regret |
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Wind![]()
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981![]() |
teardrop moon, eyes so far away, so far away from me. dancing in the rain grass grows tall trying to get free I'm like a desert storm, breif and hard, brings a flood, leaves the ground dry leaves the sky wet, wet with my grief hey I'm happy again, you know this is me pretenting to be someone else. If I didn't, how would I be interesting? not to say that I pretend to be something I am not. Oh well. I'll shut up now. Oh bye the way, I'm back and here to stay. I feel bad, I left for a while, and thought about maybee not coming back. then I realized what an idiot I would have been for doing that. do you guys think I am a mystery? I get a lot of that from my friends. Never be normal! |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
No Liz, I think you are a young lady just trying to mature...learning a lot...and doing a wonderful job of expressing yourself. Not a thing wrong in that.. Glad you didn't leave.. |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Liz, I echo everything Barry said. And what's this about you thinking of leaving? I was afraid of that when I didn't see you here for a few days. Now, just what made you want to do that, young lady? Seriously, Liz, you have made a lot of friends here who would miss you a lot if you left......me being one of those friends. ![]() "Love makes the world go around" |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
grass grows tall trying to get free I loved this line above the rest. As for you being a mystery it wouldn't be a bad thing after all like you say in your little signature line "never be normal!" |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Liz, I'm glad you decided to come back, because there's a lot in you that needs sharing, and through your writing, you have a good outlet. Welcome home. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Wind Everyone is a mystery, enjoyed. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Hello, Welcome back. Glad you decided to stay for a while. We are all a mystery...the very best parts of us... A wonderful mystery with strength, and heart, and spirit. Like the wind... ThisDiamond |
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bsquirrel![]()
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
In every lie is a kernel of truth. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Dont you dare go anywhere Elizabeth!! That is a threat!!!! your words mean too much to us all not to have them every day. You have been warned. lol. ![]() love, gem xxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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