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worth the struggle |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Climbing the stalks i slip on smooth exterior lusciously greener than leaf spine to its body of bloom. Resting in velvet curling at their edges enveloping me petals are the prize. learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. [This message has been edited by gemjop (01-08-2003 03:59 PM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I have a fondness for ladybugs, m'self... enjoyed the climb with you! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
interesting taking on the persona of the bug, being cradled by the roses |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Gemma, I liked this. It was like I was at the top of the stem looking up at the velvet red rose...... A beautiful sight...  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
nicely done !! Charisma |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
lovely words and imagery gemma  |
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