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A Celebration Song
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A Celebration Song |
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Bohemianaus Member
since 2003-01-05
Posts 69Australia (South Gippsland) |
A Celebration Song Sometimes I sat around with my TV way up loud, dyin' quietly inside. Sometimes I sat around with a beer & a mate, cryin', nowhere too hide. Sometimes I hungered for your gentle touch, wantin' your lovin' way; Scroungin' on the ground for any love I could get, tryin' to feel o.k. Anger was my main man - Pushin' me a round Dancin' in the graveyard - I was headin' for Sometimes in the Joint, in a bong or a bang, swallowin' whatever pill. My life was slippin' by, a real nowhere man, just a fool on a hill. Never knowin' what real love could be, feelin' on short pay; I thought I was doomed for the rest of my life to live this achin' way. Anger was my main man - Pushin' me a round Dancin' in the graveyard - I was headin' for But let me tell you 'bout the One I met, crazy as it may sound; Came inside my heart, chased out the dark, turned my life around. Jesus is His name, the Man from Galilee, and with His Grace He gifted me; Now living is so good, even when things go wrong, 'cos I have liberty Jesus is my main man - helpin' heal my world Dancin' in my journey - delightin' in my joy He gives me peace and joy, new family on the way, a great place to belong; And in livin' life with Him I have a Valley-guide, helpin' me be strong. What He's done for me He promises to all, dealing with sin and pain; So my celebration song is for the very Son of God and Jesus is His Name Jesus is my main man - helpin' heal my world Dancin' in my journey - delightin' in my joy (Repeat chorus to conclude) God bless and keep you, Namaste! Boh [This message has been edited by Bohemianaus (01-07-2003 07:41 PM).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I love the contrast in the song - and the scattering of song titles. Write on Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Nice write...great message. ThisDiamond |
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enchantingvamp Member
since 2002-12-21
Posts 214Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas! |
Lovely write, I think I'd like to hear what this would sound like played on a guitar. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Bohemianaus - amen brother, amen. Best to you... BC |
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