Open Poetry #24 |
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many miles to go...can't wait |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA ![]() |
Goosebumps dance over heart too small to fit in all i feel as i tip toe over memories of you picking out my most cherished blooms. Confessions i can never keep singing in between masterful trees their branches nod in affirmation I cannot contain the effortless feeling. Every changing pace of breeze consults my balance I follow your tracks they circle back to me. I'll follow you forever if you forever follow me. learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I love this, Gemma. It's so pretty...... ![]() "Love makes the world go around" |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (sigh) This is so lovely, sweet friend, I too love he thought of being followed but following at the same time! (kiss on cheek) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, this made me cry, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gemma, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-08-2003 04:06 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
soft..oh so soft and lovely! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Nicely done! Charisma |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Gem, such a circle of love.... Wonderfully written, enjoyed much! Hugs, Pat ![]() ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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