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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Past yet memory smells so young growing beneath present that doesn't yet have its trademark scent. learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
gem... surely sensual in tone...I like the blending of scent and taste that is subtly done here... nice work... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
interesting combination of time passages |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
gemjop~ I'm liking this one...the whole idea of it. This part... "memory smells so young growing beneath present" Love the thought and feel of those lines. Creative and beautifully done.  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (01-07-2003 10:00 PM).] |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Gemma, I like the way you did this... It's very good...... "Love makes the world go around" |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
thankyou muchly for your replies. they mean a lot. i enjoyed writing this one, so i'm glad you did too. well its 4.15 am in england, and i've got to get up at 8 , so i think i'll hurry off now. yeah right. i know i wont.  i'm just soooo tired, but cant sleep! thanks again. lots of love gem xxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssssss) Oh Gemma, this is beautiful, sweet friend, forgive me as I am crying as this reminded me of Joanna and how I miss her so much before she changed! (sad sigh) This is very touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gemma, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-08-2003 04:02 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gemma, this is a thought provoking write, I enjoyed it. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Gem, This is wonderful; so creative and unique! Enjoyed. Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
The new scent Becoming familiar with time spent Turned to known The longer it stays in the home. sort of like the Christmas tree seemed a shame to get rid of that nice pine smell Gloom |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Interesting write Brit.....and I liked Prof. Gloom's reply..... |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
thank you again for the replies. Yes Gloom, your reply made me think. i could smell the tree, and feel the familiarity. i love how every time you get that first whiff of christmas tree in your home, its like a new memory every time. it reminds me of childhood, and the excitement of xmas, yet its intertwined with a smell of fresh new nature. Unfortunately, for some reason, this year, our tree failed to smell at all! i was denied!  ha ha. i was NOT happy.lots of love, gemma xxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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