Open Poetry #24 |
My Heart Aches From The Missing |
garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
My heart aches from the missing of you Hurt so real, what to do I know not Phone calls never are long enough Though every single day we talk Letters every day, but can't say all we want Your touch, I miss it so very very much Your kiss, soft sweet lips touching Your hands, so loving and tender caressings Your eyes, such love I see in their soft brown Your scent, the masculine cologne, the smell of you The longing, the desire, the want of you Oh, my Love, this ache of, of my heart [This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-07-2003 02:39 AM).] |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
"Ain't nothing like the real thing", Bleeding words of longing these. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(tears fall down my cheeks) I can only feel everything about the ache! (wipes tears) I hope unlike me you and your love live happily ever after with faith and honesty in heart, sweet friend, you are so deserving of true love, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Ethel, this is achingly real. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Amen, Richard....... I love "the real thing", too... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
Sounds like your a little homesick....for your love, Hopefully you will be uniting soon and your poems will read of that. Nicely done Ethel ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Noah, no-one is more deserving of "true love" than you are...... Because you truly are an ~Ethel~ |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh Kethry, it is so real. I miss him so much it hurts........ "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yes, Salty (girl), I am so "homesick" for him. You're right about that, too... "Home" is wherever he is. I just wish I could get that across to my Dad.... "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-07-2003 11:30 AM).] |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Heart hugs from me to you..... It has to be difficult, no matter phone calls, letters and e-mail.... and especially when trying to abide by someone else's opinion of what you should do..... Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I remember feeling this way...thanks for the reminding. |
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quik Member
since 2002-11-27
Posts 91Dinwiddie,Virginia |
I feel your emotions in this piece and thanks for you welcoming comments. its good to be back. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yes, Pat...it is hard. It looks like I'd quit trying to please my Dad. I'm just so thankful that Gary is so understanding. I just hope that he doesn't get tired of waiting ..... "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Vandana, I'm so glad that you like it. Thank you.. "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Dixie, like I told you in my reply to one of your poems..... some memories should never be thown away, or pushed back in our minds. They should be in a safe place and cherished. Those are the memories that keep us going in this life...the good ones. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wow! I know this feeling... I do hope all works out okay for you and Gary. ~Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yes, Antonio, those emotions of longing and wanting to see my Love are almost to much to bear sometimes. I have to write or something. I'm just so glad that all of you are here to encourage with your sweet and compassionate words. Thank you.... "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Nancy Lee, thank you so much for your well-wishes. I do believe that our strong love and commitment to each other will overcome all obstacles we may have to endure. Neither of us have ever had feelings for another human being as strong as we share for each other... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
you express your heart with such deep emotion..'tis wonderful to share something so beautiful in this life--enjoyed!! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
True love shall find its way, Ethel - These are lovely words to pen to your loved one... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Sandpiper. Yes, we do feel very blessed to have found each other, "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Nan, thank you for your sweet reply. I appreciate your words.... (BTW, I've been looking for some more of your poems Here. You must be busy with your sweet little Grandbaby. Why don't you start another "Passions Add-on"? I'm still not certain what those little Japanese verses are called, so I don't want to start one. The other one you started was really fun, though.) "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-08-2003 11:47 AM).] |
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