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Eight Tiny Letters Form Three Little Words
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Eight Tiny Letters Form Three Little Words |
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Gunslinger Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 901TX, USA 
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Eight little letters, Form three little words, That carry such magic, Whenever they're heard. The the first one is "I", And the last letter "u". With "love" in the middle, Provided it's true. "I", what a pity- My worst enemy... I see in the mirror, I find to be me. "U" are the answer- To all that I need. To solve the equation, Make romance indeed. The four little letters- Found in the midst... Some time they are crooned, Yet often are hissed... L-O-V-E, And all things are great, But H-A-T-E, Sadly spells hate. Be careful in speaking, Those three little words- Especially in anger... Don't let them be heard. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Gunslinger, I like the way you take the cliche and turn it around. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Sometimes the fine line between creates havoc, doesn't it? You're definitely a romantic at heart, GS..  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 Very nicely done, John. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I like this alot! you've got a lot of style here, smooth and yes definitely a romantic at heart... very right, we should always watch our words. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
John...well said!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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