Open Poetry #24 |
In the Moonlight, Shadows Dancing |
Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
From a long ago challenge... In the Moonlight, Shadows Dancing In the moonlight, foggy moonlight, misty dark and still comes the shadows dancing, ‘cross my window’s sill. Misty foggy moonlight, embracing all in memory what lies ahead in moonlight, let my starving heart then see. Shadows of past transgressions come forth, and they now sage, not of merry mirth ~ proof of what was taken from Mother Earth, now weighs me down, waist in chains now girthed. Silently the drums roll on, through the moonlight’s call, in the moonlight, shadows dancing, dancing on the pale; silently the shadows show the misery of man in the moonlight, shadows dancing, no one took a stand. Shadows dancing, beckoning me, come to the moonlight feelings of feelings of feelings, I simply cannot fight, on toward wisps of beings, gone and long since past lay before me broken promises, strewn upon the grass. Oh in the cool damp moonlight, shadows do slow dance, to have lived and loved the earth, a life's greatest romance, for without a promise to the earth to hold in great esteem life will lose its hold on me, and all of life’s great dream. In the moonlight, foggy moonlight, misty dark and still comes the shadows dancing, ‘cross my window’s sill. Misty foggy moonlight, embracing all in memory what lies beyond in moonlight, let all the truth to see. ~*~ 24 January, 2000 ©KRJ revised 6 January 2003 [This message has been edited by Sunshine (01-06-2003 07:00 AM).] |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
“now weighs me down, waist in chains now girthed.” Wrap ‘round me, Metals from deep down inside, Weight ‘round me Worries I had hoped to hide; Silver chains Upon these hips harshly ride With their pain Walking on my muse does glide. Gloom |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Karilea, I thank you for resurrecting this beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading it so much and love the way you put the words together. I will come back to this and read it again later today. Hugs, Marti |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful read first thing this morning Karilea. Much enjoyed the imagery and flow. Wonderful...absolutely wonderful. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
a good read a lovely, lyrical rhythm with which to start the day Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, One of your best from beginning to end. |
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