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Reflections from the Core
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Reflections from the Core |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Reflections from the Core You ask me but I can’t name them my troubles all so lost am I to sky a glance would dance the loss and hear the weep I am only air do not listen to my call the world is crying and I cannot hold them all wasted minutes gone gone Confuse the inner space this hope is suffering the most and numbers subtract themselves until I’m left with me myself The core circles in again to hold my skin so dear I try to hear the sky and all all withdraw one splendor cause in faith a gate that opens past the pall and meets the end in time safe Then to what purpose give report that travels swift upon the day and turns the clock around around to find the place beginning ends and only trouble find again |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
lament....beautifully done and with impact.. hope all is well my friend... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hauntingly beautiful..and so much enjoyed by this reader. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, Cpat called it right... a lament... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie Seems hopeless, enjoyed the read. |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
I love the way you have of taking the reader along for the ride....twisting, turning, walking in circles....starting all over again. Nicely done ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
yes... a keeper. perfect, martie.  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Martie, I understand these feelings so well but I know that deep in the core of it all the diamond rests and you will find circles of joy come swimming to you, yay! (kiss on cheek) I send angel hugs your way, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Martie, Gee. Hugs and love and prayers, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
You ask me but I can’t name them my troubles all so lost am I to sky a glance would dance the loss and hear the weep I am only air do not listen to my call the world is crying and I cannot hold them all wasted minutes gone gone ============================== The core circles in again to hold my skin so dear I try to hear the sky and all all withdraw one splendor cause in faith a gate that opens past the pall and meets the end in time safe ================================ you know you just wrote a moth anthem ... and you know what I always say...(it aint easy being a moth baby) ....yes....you know.  so lost am I to sky a glance would dance the loss and hear the weep I am only air do not listen to my call the world is crying and I cannot hold them all wasted minutes gone gone oh my...this bleeds and weeps so beautifully. mothyhugs you!! |
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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium |
*wow* enjoyed hugs, kelly The greatest thing u'll ever learn |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Martie, I would be so happy if I could express myself just a little bit as well as you do.....You are just so good, sweet friend. I love to read your poetry......  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Such is the cycle of life, eh?... How DO you do this, m'friend??... |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Confuse the inner space this hope is suffering the most and numbers subtract themselves until I’m left with me myself Does get down to the heart of it all. Enjoyed Martie. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Martie - even inlamentation your words touch in such special ways - this is very special - Paul |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Then to what purpose give report that travels swift upon the day and turns the clock around around to find the place beginning ends and only trouble find again Cycles, routines can be broken, sometiems the spiral goes up instead of down. Hope all is well. enjoyed the read, btw I found the song. got hips like cinderella must be having a good shame talking sweet about nothing |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
Then to what purpose give report that travels swift upon the day and turns the clock around around to find the place beginning ends and only trouble find again ..just..WOW!!! I do love the way you write!!! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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