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Open Poetry #24

Heavy Duty Hook

ccvulture
Junior Member

since 2002-11-06

Posts 16

0 posted 2003-01-05 06:53 PM

HEAVY DUTY HOOK

I left the coast gone fishing
Just thought I’d have a look
I caught myself a monster
With my heavy duty hook.

I took it home for dinner
I’m not your average cook
I hung it out to dry and smoke
On a heavy duty hook

I laid it on my table
Opened the recipe book
I wrote them all myself
It’s bound with a heavy hook

And after doing the dishes
I smoked and read a book
While playing monstrous music
With a heavy duty hook.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2003-01-05 07:50 PM

lots of hooks in this poem, all of them interesting and all of them poetic.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Bohemianaus
Member

since 2003-01-05

Posts 69
Australia (South Gippsland)

2 posted 2003-01-05 07:55 PM

Mmmm there is an interesting underlying metaphor here - got me hooked

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