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Open Poetry #24

A heartbeat of a lifetime

zenny
Member

since 2002-11-24

Posts 371
Belgium

0 posted 2003-01-05 05:41 PM

A heartbeat of a lifetime
when everything seems allright
able to climb the rays of the sunshine
now all problems are out of sight

The Next beat...
Back to reality is your faith
A blizzard of bad feelings takes seat
with your only option left is to wait

'Cause once all your problems will solve
and every day you'll see happiness evolve
And you'll look back and realise one huge truth
For all the battles you have fought have build many strengths in your youth

The greatest thing u'll ever learn
is just to love
and be loved
in return

*hugs* Kelly.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2003-01-07 03:57 AM

Enjoyed...James

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2003-01-07 06:39 AM

Zenny,
I enjoyed the irregular metre of this.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

3 posted 2003-01-07 07:53 AM

...and we become the sum total of those experiences.. though it takes a lifetime... Well said, zenny..

zenny
Member

since 2002-11-24

Posts 371
Belgium

4 posted 2003-01-07 10:34 AM

thanks for your kind replies

The greatest thing u'll ever learn
is just to love
and be loved
in return

*hugs* Kelly.

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

5 posted 2003-01-07 12:37 PM

zenny,
you said it well! and what doesn't kill you only makes you stronger, yup?

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-01-07 12:50 PM

YES

Love this one! Great wisdom!

zenny
Member

since 2002-11-24

Posts 371
Belgium

7 posted 2003-01-07 01:37 PM

kaile & passingshadows , both thanks for replying
and you are right there kaile

The greatest thing u'll ever learn
is just to love
and be loved
in return

*hugs* Kelly.

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