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GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

0 posted 2003-01-05 05:25 PM

A villian walked towards me
And with my sword held out
He trembled away as his cowardly self.

Another came and I held my sling
He tried to fight but I called out
More Mightily any can overcome.
He too trembled away.

I sat down
And my sword lay against my lap.
I had already fought battle after battle.
The scars and the bloodstains frighten some,
But I hold up pretty well I guess.

The protection around me cannot be defeated.
Victory is already won,
But they keep fighting.
   So do I.

And I keep pressing on,
And others tremble when they see me
The scars .. and that armor, oh, its glorious
Fit for more than a king.

A lord of this earth would have lesser armor.
And so all I need to do is call out
And they run,
   If I keep fighting.

As long as my sword is kept out for them to see
Double edged.
It cuts through marrow.

Shining silvery, outlined warrior.
Bravery, courage, heroism,
Truth and strength.

Does it bleed to the inside?
Can you tell whats underneath?
I wouldn’t be so sure.

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

[This message has been edited by GG (01-05-2003 05:35 PM).]

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-01-06 04:33 AM

peace soon, I hope

rainman
Junior Member

since 2002-12-14

Posts 21

2 posted 2003-01-06 10:19 AM

well done!!!
waiting for more of your work....

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

3 posted 2003-01-06 07:05 PM

Thank you both for reading and replying!
Much appreciated.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Salty
Senior Member

since 2002-11-23

Posts 669
Texas

4 posted 2003-01-07 12:46 PM

half the battle of winning lays in the imagery of one's thoughts first. You sure sound like a winner to me.
~Salty

In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you.
--Deepak Chop

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

5 posted 2003-01-07 06:00 PM

are thoughts sure do affect how we do things, don't they? ...thanks for your kind remark and reading

I'm assured I'm more than a conquorer. I'm quite thankful and satisfied.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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