This love is despondent... ("Madness" revised)

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Open Poetry #24

This love is despondent... ("Madness" revised)

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2003-01-05 05:10 PM

This love is despondent when you embrace me,
And it is despondent when you embrace me not,
And loving you like this, I fear I’m crazy,
Thus feels an atheist who fears that there’s no God.

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Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2003-01-05 07:33 PM

why shouldst thou be cast down, knowest not that love dwellest in the very cracks of belief and in the strength of doubting?

Loved what you did.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-01-06 03:49 AM

made me think

Ethan Halo
Senior Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 793
on the roof again

3 posted 2003-01-06 04:04 AM

made me think too... of my ex-girlfriend.
i'd go hit stuff now, but my broken knuckle's still healing...
i guess that means i'm getting despondant. s'aight. it's good for my well-being.

liked this master.

it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-01-06 04:11 AM

Well, Master, it made me think, too...and I think that's a good thing... Very interesting and good write...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

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