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You Never Knew
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You Never Knew |
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jeffwillett Member
since 2003-01-04
Posts 86Texas, US |
-You Never Knew- I sit around and think of you, Of all the things that we may do. I think of how you make me smile, How nice it'd be if you'd stay awhile. When I look into your eyes, All I see is vast blue skies. As you pass I smell your hair, I'm left behind without a care. Your voice is like a sirens call, I can not help myself at all. Nothing compares to my love, It makes me swear you're from above. I sit around and think of you, These are things you never knew. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is so pretty. I hope the person you're writing of knows real soon...  "Love makes the world go around" |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Jeff, This is beautiful...wishing you a continued happy love. Enjoyed. Warm regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
nice sentiments, tell her!!! |
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jeffwillett Member
since 2003-01-04
Posts 86Texas, US |
she knows, but when i write i try to get into a state of mind that i either was in before or have never been in and then write about it |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awwww...what a romantic! |
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Kristine Member
since 2002-10-30
Posts 92Mahal Kita!!! |
beautiful poem, I enjoyed! Kris  Sometimes Love is like awkward poetry, the words may not be just right |
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