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Passionate Feelings Stirring (part 4)
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Passionate Feelings Stirring (part 4) |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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From the core of our beings we feel Love so devine, could only be from God A true love, with promises of endurance This love, felt with passion stirring Emotions felt strongly, with desire With want and longing we both share Desire to please each other in every way Physical, emotional, sensual feelings Stirred within us, with love unconditional Loving, needing each other always Within us, fire burning, never-ending Forever, a flame burning with desire for each other We, thinking we had lost this, this feeling This love we share, though similar, different Like no other love either has ever experienced This love that fills every inch of our bodies From the very top of, our heads to our feet To the very tips of our fingers We feel pleasure, contentment, fulfillment In every fiber of our beings is love Physical, mental, emotional, spiritual This awakened love we share, me for you, you for me [This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-05-2003 12:00 PM).] |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
well.. I'll be! We DO feel that way dont we? reading this makes me glad |
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rainman Junior Member
since 2002-12-14
Posts 21 |
"Physical, mental, emotional, spiritual This awakened love we share, me for you, you for me" i loved it all ,especially those words above.. a share of a passion, isn't it? waiting for more... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Eagle Scorpion. I'm glad that it made you "feel glad"...  "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Rainman, I'm glad that you liked it. Yes, the passion is definately shared....in every way.....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
You write of every emotion and thought i feel for my Rhys. I am loving this series of poems. they sincerely get better each time. this gave me goose bumps with its truth. i identify with your feelings completely. thanks for being the hopeless real romantic that you are Ethel. you don't realise the talent you posess for putting into words all these magical feelings we feel, i for one struggle, but reading yours make up for not being able to write myself on paper what i feel.  Thanks again Ethel, for your expressive way with words. lots of love, gemma xxxxxx  learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
garysgirl - a'hhhh, the passion is wonderful and without end... BC |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Ethel, this is so beautiful, sweet friend, I caught a glimpse of how spiritual and uncanny a love can really be so I can relate and just the thought of it makes me cry even more! (wipes tears) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love. Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Gemma, thank you so much, friend. Your words made me feel so good. I am really glad that you identify with the words I write about my Gary and me. Sometimes it's very hard for me to put all these wonderful feelings and emotions onto paper in just the way I want to. It is fun trying, though. I'm glad that you enjoy reading my poems.  Oh, and thanks very much for putting it into your library.....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you so much, Bill. I really appreciate your reading and replying to my poems. I love reading yours, too. "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-05-2003 02:24 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh Noah... I'm so sorry for what you're going through. I don't mean to make you cry. I hope and pray that you'll be smiling again soon, sweet Noah... "Love makes the world go around" |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Ethel, this is beutiful; im truthfully, not very big on God, or is he is there, i believe he too, is part of the bigger picture, but this is loving and spiritual |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Sound like true and lasting love to me! There is nothing like it. "...From the core of our beings we feel Love so devine, could only be from God..." I couldn't agree more Ethel. I'm working on writing some love poems just cause you asked!!! Hugs, Marti |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
inkedgoddess, I really do appreciate your comments. You are sweet. thank you.... "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Marti, for your sweet reply. And, I'll be looking for your love poems. I'm sure they'll be beautiful, just as all your poetry is...... "Love makes the world go around" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
HEY! I know I read this and replied! Who stole my reply???? ...Alert ...Alert ...Alert! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Dixie, thanks for reading again..... "Love makes the world go around" |
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