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In Sorrowed Times (part 1)
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In Sorrowed Times (part 1) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Through Her Eyes (part 1) her vision has begun to fade bordered on the edge of blue blended with the days of gray and drinking empty without you a shadow followed once, a course pretense, in all seductions whim telescoped her every worth and altered, bitter sweet of him her eyes once joined the sight in trust engaged in fantasies of bliss but nevermore her heart would hide as lips escaped, in touch of kiss his eyes were that of blue on blue in sadness, reigned from sorrowed times back street shrouded, stories masked the inner strength of outer rhymes the elements of one on one were left to be in hands of fate each dawn surprised the morrow's gain each night possessed a slower gait. and so this story to be told a first, this of, in parts of voice written words in soft, decry of she, no longer blue of choice "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (01-05-2003 10:32 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, I hope so. Nice write. |
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LADY_DEATH Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 105Fl |
Beautiful poem! |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Maureen, Beautiful...looking forward to parts 2,3,4,5, etc............  "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-05-2003 11:27 AM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
SY  I am just dwelling in some memories, thought I'd try my hand at a poetic tale of sorts *s thanks for reading.LADY_DEATH , Thank You Ethel, I don't know how many parts there will be depending on my mood and if the words come to me. Thank you for always being here hugss M |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
nakdthoughts - your words are always with meaning and written from within... BC |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Hey Bill, thank you sweets...it's nice to see you every now and then, brings me smiles. hugssss M |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Very nicely done now will have to find the other parts |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you Brad, I only did one more part...I am not too good at story telling, it seems. /pip/Forum76/HTML/001170.html this is part 2.. you may be sorry you read it. *s M |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
~M~ Liked this a lot. Very well written and I am off to find the others. Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
The second part is in the link above your reply *s thanks Pat..and I just finished the 3rd this evening. hugs M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 nice! I enjoyed |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
your shadow is always passing over my words and leaving its mark *s thanks |
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