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Open Poetry #24

When Forever Is Over

dhicks03
Member

since 2002-12-26

Posts 267
Missouri,USA

0 posted 2003-01-05 12:48 PM

Tonight I was asked
"Whatever happened to"
looked down as I hoisted my glass
as the memories hit me from the past
'Twas all I could do
to muster a shake of my head
change the subject of you
and color it dead
thought to myself,
"When forever's over
I won't remember
how much I loved you anymore"

Oh, love was the most intoxicating
memories of us even more
as I looked at my guest contemplating
of telling our tale I wondered what for
just let jack black answer
of loves lost dancer for
"when forever is over
I won't remember
how much I loved you anymore"

When this bird has flown
endured more pain than humanly known
and I sit there with thought of why
I shed no tear
or wonder how high
I will fly
without you there
to be my sky
For there will be no
psychology ,theology, or apology
For you and I for
when forever
is over,
I... won't remember
How much I loved you...anymore

Copyright © -2001 Dennis Hicks

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2003-01-05 01:37 AM

Well you poem made me think but I have to tell you that when forever is over you remember even more how very much you loved someone, or at least I have. The strangest part is you get even more "bonded" when they are gone. Good read, thank you.

~ The soul lies buried in ink that does not flow ~