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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2003-01-04 01:51 PM

Long shadows

Long shadows greet our early morn
As promise stretches this, our day.
So, kiss me sweet good morn and bless
Our golden trails that lay
Before us like a promise, kept
Then dry the tears that might be wept.

Long shadows greet our early dusk
No matter, stature does not mind,
For looming lengthy is this love
Where two in blend shall bind,
Before us is the promise, kept
Long gone are tears that were once wept.

Trust long shadows of two who stand
To greet days come nights, hand in hand.

© Copyright 2003 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2003-01-04 01:56 PM

Sunshine - your words always potent, rhyming like two hands holding in long shadows...

BC

passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-01-04 02:04 PM

nice

Spiros Zafiris
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3 posted 2003-01-04 02:34 PM

..Sunshine../\..yes, very sweet poem; very melodic; very good..

../\..Spiros

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Canada eh.

4 posted 2003-01-04 02:57 PM

Oh so very pretty dear lady.
You are really getting good with that camera too!
Beautiful combination of words and picture.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy Lee~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

vandana

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5 posted 2003-01-04 07:53 PM

enjoyed

Sandpiper
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land of flora and fauna

6 posted 2003-01-05 05:57 AM

Enjoyed!! I've always found shadows images as fascinating as those imagined in the clouds, nice pic too!!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

7 posted 2003-01-06 08:46 AM

I love this Karilea...the shadow reminds me of the walking trees in the Lord of the Rings, The Two Towers

M

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