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Feather Touch
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Feather Touch |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Feather Touch dust of years has collected on me thick in some a sprinkling at others brush me rub past the surface to see beneath the blur “life is not about breathing moments, it is about moments that leave you breathless.” author unknown |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Very profound and honest Helen. Very well written and much enjoyed! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ooooh!! You read my mind!! I love this Helen..so open and honest! ~Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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DonFurr Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 172Monticello IN |
The shine You reveal within your words Can do nothing less than prove to us the radiance that must lie under your dust "If there is any doubt about it there is no doubt about it." Linnie Stanton |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*sigh* |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
helen - and beneath the blur is beauty... BC |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
loved! so much feeling and meaning.  learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Denea Furr Junior Member
since 2002-11-03
Posts 31Indiana |
sometimes I wonder if your real. Your work is inspiring to obviously many. |
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rainman Junior Member
since 2002-12-14
Posts 21 |
i am thinking of how far away does the past remain to be.can never re-live it.but they can see it "underneath the dust"..can't they? your lines are wonderful, honestly... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
seeing beneath the blur is one of those things that rarely seem to happen to us...the dust just usually makes people sneeze... enjoyed... |
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