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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Via e-mail Click, click, click, combinations of emotions merging over years in friendly heys and hellos, scattering airwaves, waving them both on toward encouraging one then the other, click, click, click she knew he knew she knew in his real he became more as he made little of his presence, and left her such presents when he click, click, clicked via e-mail “I’m coming in,” she typed, then with more hesitation than would show on his screen, she added, “care to meet me?” Was he even at the monitor, she would never know, or did he just sit in a maze of thought… was she too forward? was he even there? did it even matter? Click, click, click. He forwarded directions for a coffee sort of place to meet, and she never questioned the trust she had because you don’t click, click, click for years and run into a total stranger over coffee. His face? More than kind. Mannerisms? As had been described. Truths? As had been clicked. Via e-mail. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Decaflame Interesting write, enjoyed the read. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Thank you Sy. Sometimes, people are just lucky. This was one of those times for this particular person. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Glad this had a happy ending. I know that not all do. Nicely written. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hey Deca!! Good to see you girlie! Loved this...click click click! Ohhh yesss.... ~Hugs~  ~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~ |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is really good. I've heard about these internet meetings....some good, some bad. I'm glad this one is good. You wrote it very well.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
GS - you are right, not all do. For these particular folks, it turned out just right. Enchantress - I'm always around, you know that. This was a rather quiet write, but then, they cannot all be sparklers... Gary'sgirl - thank you. Better to err on the side of caution - but these two knew each other well enough to know that both were harmless, and just friends outside of the real. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(chuckling) I think I am losing it... I read click click click..as cluck cluck cluck.. on the first glance... Geez... I was suddenly transported into a scene with with a couple of chickens pecking at the keyboard... Liked the write... and glad the meeting went well for these two... one never really knows do they... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh my gosh, I just love this, so many of the relationships are bad on-line but me and Joanna have loved each other for over a year and met on-line too, yay! (big hugggssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Decca Friends are friends...and a heart knows with a click who to trust, who is real. How nice it is to actually be able to meet for coffee and eye to eye. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
laughing at Ron... well, anyhow...I love this one, a definate charmer. |
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Music Maker Member
since 2002-07-07
Posts 152THE ORIGINAL !!!! |
What perceptive lines!!! I thought it was written about a personal experience until I read your replies above....Shame on you for spoiling my delusion!!! So many memories revived...Sunnyone and I Click, Click Clicked, for over a year, most days for over 10 hours, and through the clicks we fell in love, - A year ago - she flew 9,000 miles to be with me for the first time, ...stayed, and two weeks ago we got married!!!! ---- You could say we really 'Clicked' !!!! Thank you for the lovely write, and the revival of memories. Kind thoughts from, The Music Maker, (John) Someone who thinks logically provides a nice contrast to the real world. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Clicking can bring great surprises. LOL at that Capt'n reply. Cluck? Peck peck peck, oh what the heck, just fly around the barnyard and find somewhere to roost? |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
O but to click the time into a moment of treasure for two To let the hands fly and ply those words in capture of eye. Nicely done Deca....such a gift of friendship given in this thing we call Email.. |
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Rusty Junior Member
since 2002-12-14
Posts 18 |
a fun write, enjoyed Rusty |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
All that clicking has brought some wonderful people into my life. *S* And I've heard the horror stories and still feel it's a wonderful way to get to know someone... Yes, people can deceive... but you can meet liars at church, too. *S* I like this very much, Deca... and love MM's success story! *S* |
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likitysplit Junior Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 23Alabama |
Isnt it great when two people can click like that. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
click... click... click... type ... type ... type ... and so the story goes in hidden words of hidden thoughts and hidden layers of hidden feelings and so the story goes on and on and on nice write, Deca~ good to read youRegards, Sudhir |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
in his real he became more as he made little of his presence, and Decaflame, i enjoyed your words and thought the above line was brilliant...an interesting and timely take on a technology that has consumed our lives to a certain extent... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
The never ending emai story... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very interesting...and so good to see you posting again Deca!! Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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