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sweet vellum
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho 
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her thoughts move and the poem's twirl takes different shape scenery coupled with motion and nature enhancing the quality attired in the depth of raw emotion pressing against her form until the imagery itself literally burst through on satin vellum in swollen flames from molten quill the poet's desire is hot & the only waking activity in the world can’t be consumed in slumber but was instead kissed by crafty lips & coy sable tongue & though shadows conceal the poignant recognition that while change is inevitably running its course the outward appearance of things may look the same though the mist in dawn is moist and not a true cause for despair under the circumstance and so continuing she 2002/12/22 07:22 PM Speaking of ghosts, and after such an eternity. . .wouldn't you know, here comes mine again... ~Rosemary J. Gwaltney~ [This message has been edited by lucky (01-03-2003 09:30 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
OUTSTANDING! I'm going to tuck this one away safely, to re-read again and again. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lucky....I have always admired the way you poor a thought onto paper, as if it was some fiber of your heart made into words...sweet and slick and salty. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
damn, that's good! |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Lucky, The best run-on sentence I ever read and one of the best poems in awhile. I did not take one breath until finished reading. Wow! Good! Enjoyed! Warm regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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