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Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18
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the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-01-03 02:30 PM


Dam breaks and I am
drowned in waves of me
On days like these
I let them carry
me where they will
I am wise enough
to know these waters
will calm
and that they flow
to bigger seas
But on days like these
I endulge the undertow
sinking ever deeper
into the vanity
and self pity
of days like these

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inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
1 posted 2003-01-03 02:34 PM


yea, but fish love days like these too, dont u know?
Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
2 posted 2003-01-03 02:42 PM


of course I know, the curse and blessing of the fish
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2003-01-03 02:46 PM


undertows can be a good thing
Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
4 posted 2003-01-03 04:06 PM


Depends on how far down you let it take you Dixie
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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5 posted 2003-01-05 03:15 AM


Enjoyed...James
littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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New York
6 posted 2003-04-05 02:45 AM



I am wise enough
to know these waters
will calm
and that they flow
to bigger seas

nuff said . . .  always amazing me - listen to your own words - they ring true . . . xxoo

vandana
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7 posted 2003-04-10 10:59 AM


enjoyed
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