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Passionate Feelings Stirring (part 3)
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Passionate Feelings Stirring (part 3) |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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Our kisses awakened feelings suppressed for much too long Pushed way down into the very depths of ourselves Into our inner beings where We would allow no-one Not even ouselves to explore Feelings of new love and desire Ones only the very young usually experience With a freshness of joy and excitement Excitement of the awareness of new passion Desires being awakened from where we thought we had left them to die long ago These treasures discovered from true love The passions not only physical, but from inside Deep, emotional, spiritual, from our inner beings [This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-03-2003 11:33 AM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
such feelings and findings are indeed to be treasured... nicely done. |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
You can't beat that Ethel.....the passion flowing in every word as in your heart. Good for U !!!!! ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Capt. Ron, I really appreciate your replies...  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Love knows no time restraints  ...This is lovely, Ethel... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Salty, for stopping and reading and replying...  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Ah..this makes me anxious for my inner being to heal. Beautiful. Susan |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very true, Nan, My Love says that "age is only a number". I really believe it, especially since he makes me feel like a teenager again.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Ethel... This brings to mind the line from the song.. "Love is lovelier, the second time around". Indeed at times I do believe it is wasted on the young.. Enjoyed this so much! ~Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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visitvenus Member
since 2002-12-30
Posts 101PA, USA |
Beautiful.....I hope I find this feeling once again. -Venus |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh yes, Susan, when the right person comes along, with the patience, love, and understanding that every person deserves, it will..... "Love makes the world go around" |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Ethel, Your best ever. You've written so well capturing much with your honesty and in-depth look at love thought lost forever. So tremendously glad you've found this new awakening. So joyous you must be. I am, for you. Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Nancy Lee, I hadn't thought of that song, but it does go with it doesn't it? I think it takes maturity and trials of life to make people realize what they really have, when they are in love. I wish I had known what I know now about how to keep love alive, when I was younger. But, then I probably would have never met Gary. That would be a terrible loss, too...... Thank you, sweet lady  "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Venus, sometimes it comes when you least expect it. When my Love and I met, neither of us were looking for a long-term relationship. It started out as friendship, but over the last five years, has grown into a love like neither of us thought we would ever experience again. I hope you find true love very soon..... "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Pat, I really do appreciate you and your wise, encouraging words to me. You are one of the dearest and most caring people at PIP. I know that when you say something you mean it with all sincerity. Thank you for being a friend. I really appreciate you, Lady, and I do believe you are an Angel....  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
the way you write it, I almost believe it's for real |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh Dixie, my friend.. it IS for real....I'll be so glad when you meet someone who will return the love that you are so capable of giving. With this kind of true love, Dixie, you feel a peace inside of knowing that NOTHING you say or do will change his love for you. I have never received this kind of "unconditional love" before from anyone, except from God. I didn't even know that another person could love me that way. It's the way I love, whenever I love.....unconditionally... Actually, I don't know how to love any other way......I either do, or I don't. But, Gary feels the exact same way for me. They are so many things I could go into to let you know that it really is real, but I won't here.. I didn't intend to say all that, but it seems to just roll out of me sometimes whenever I'm talking about the love that Gary and I share. It's just so amazing to me.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
garysgirl - How well I know these feelings, Oh yes indeed... BC |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bill, I do believe you do, you romantic, you. You sure can write about them, too....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Ugh Hopeless, you are hopeless Ethel. Hopelessly romantic that is and good for you |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
A lovely read. Thank you. Sunkissed. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Ethel, somehow I've missed #1 and #2 but I will go searching for them. You have outdone yourself with #3. This is so stunningly romantic. Great job. Hugs, Marti |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ethel--You are very lucky indeed to be able to tell such a beauitful love story. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Raph, because I consider that a compliment... HaHa!! Seriously, I just can't help myself from writing love poems, since I'm so in love...... "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sunkissed.... Thank YOU, for reading and replying to me. I appreciate.... "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Marti, thank you for liking my poem...... About #1 and #2.......... Actually #1 was one of the "twenty or less", that I did. And #2 is that one plus I added on to it. I can't say it all in one poem, so I decide to do more of them. I posted #2 at about 3:46 this morning...couldn't sleep......Thank you, friend... "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Marti, thank you for reading and for your sweet comment. Yes, my Love and I feel very, very blessed to have each other...... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssssss) Again apologize if I ay seem so deeply maudlin and overemotional crying reading your beautiful love poems, for I can't help it as I keep thinking of Joanna reading them and wanting so much to feel a special friendship last forever as I believe I know what love is and feel it has been stolen from me! (sad sigh) Your gorgeous words of love are timeless, sweet friend, I wish for the bluebird of happiness to always sing for you and Gary joyfully, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Noah. I'm so glad to see you here. Noah, I'm so sorry about Joanna. It's bad when other people get involved in our love life, isn't it? I wish I knew more to say to help your feelings, but I don't know what to say.... "Love makes the world go around" |
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