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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-01-03 08:06 AM

somewhere beyond
springs slumber
and winters embrace,
the wind makes its way
and resonsates,
in bittersweet chimes
with their faraway cries,
that sing to those
that stay behind,
lamenting the loss ,
of love long gone
and the waiting through
of now 3 full moons,
for the circle of dreams
to come full again

Opeth
Senior Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 1543
The Ravines

1 posted 2003-01-03 08:39 AM

A seasonal feeling of lost love is what I felt.

Hopefully you will find a new love before the next full moon arrives.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-01-03 01:58 PM

yes! I enjoyed this piece. Thanks.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

3 posted 2003-01-03 02:21 PM

Don't ever stop writing, ever.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2003-01-03 02:32 PM

inkedgoddess
When one anticipates the wait is long, enjoyed.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-01-03 03:25 PM

inkedgoddess, I like the way you write.....

By the way, My brother lived in New York City for years, and he loved it. He says he's going back there to live again when he can.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2003-01-03 03:27 PM

inkedgoddess - dreams come true, perhaps in three full moons, or four, but true...

BC

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

7 posted 2003-01-03 09:04 PM

Could feel the movement of the seasons, every morn and eve. Wonderful. TD

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

8 posted 2003-01-04 11:46 PM

Sometimes you need to move forward and let the cycle begin again. Its hard to give up a dream or memory but to grow and expand you have to. Facing reality is the hardest thing of all.

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