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Open Poetry #24

Breathing (10 or less)

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-01-02 12:42 PM

Breathing

in bottled up
blue
my dreams
bubble
touched by
you

“life is not about breathing moments, it is about moments that leave you breathless.” author unknown

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-01-02 12:46 PM

Wow!

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

2 posted 2003-01-02 02:01 PM

You gotta love it. Great!

Gentle breezes,
Wafting through my consciousness.
A pleasant awakening,
Reminding me of the contentment's
Of my life. ©spirit

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-01-02 03:02 PM

Amazing, you are...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2003-01-03 11:39 AM

a few words to convey a great deal...
very nicely done... this style sits well with you I think.

visitvenus
Member

since 2002-12-30

Posts 101
PA, USA

5 posted 2003-01-03 12:29 PM

Very nice!

-Venus

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

6 posted 2003-01-03 11:48 PM

i like! helen, you are really a poet of few words and of great substance...

Denea Furr
Junior Member

since 2002-11-03

Posts 31
Indiana

7 posted 2003-01-05 04:03 AM

It's amazing how you can take just a few words to thourally explain a true feeling. I like it.

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