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Claiming Salvation
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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA 
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Claiming Salvation What does God think when He looks down And sees the crime in every town? How disappointing we must be To He, who made us joyfully And yet He never turns away. He walks beside us through each day And when He sees an act that shows A heart that's kind, it's then He knows His teachings are still heard by some. Upon that day, when He is come To weigh our faults, where will we stand, In gaining Paradise He's planned? I like to think there's just a few Who would not qualify.Will you And will I too, be one to claim Salvation, in our Savior's name? |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Such a thought provoking piece of writing here Betty Lou that was very much enjoyed. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Sue: Thanks you so much for commenting on this one. I always enjoy hearing from you. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
This poem was not exactly technically sophisticated with respect to the art of poetry itself. However, I did like the heart of its message. 2+2=5 for sufficiently large values of 2 |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
fracta1007: Thanks for commenting! Betty Lou Hebert |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Trillium, I thought the poem was well written. Very clear, your point.  ....jo |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
iliana: Thanks for commenting. It's nice to hear from you! Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BettyLou~ YOU are dang near poetically perfect~ This is one that should be published ... and I'm sure you're just a heartbeat away from that happening~ Love you dearest poetess~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: I appreciate your response so much! You are always so supportive! Love betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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