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jjbreunig3
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since 2009-07-29
Posts 423
Maine, USA

0 posted 2017-05-04 02:10 PM


With my poetic words, I’m looking to breathe Life
into the souls and spirits of others to prevent…
the conditions that lead one to a spiritual Death;
with directness, my messages’ clarity is clear,
as instructed in the Great Commission from Christ.

Temptations of head-scratching, clutter, confusion
and being overly clever are avoided, when Biblical
references are supplied; hopefully, my personality
shines through, despite my analytical thinking and
my spiritual creativeness of expressing Salvation.

My idealized thoughts are evident and recognizable;
now most of my readers, can easily detect the sound
of my inward voice, with its straight-forwardness
and consistency. Finding a resonance of Faith, they
can identify and love poems… that are analyzable!



Author notes

Inspired by Marie Forleo’s instructional video
“The Copy Cure”; learn more at:
http://thecopycure.com/best-writing-class/

Learn more about me and my poetry at:
http://amzn.to/1ffo9YZ  

By Joseph J. Breunig 3rd, © 2016, All rights reserved.



Logic, when applied to people, fails miserably! --Joseph J. Breunig 3rd

© Copyright 2017 Joseph J. Breunig 3rd - All Rights Reserved
bbynams
Junior Member
Posts 49

1 posted 2019-03-25 10:02 PM


I disagree that "most poetry" is nihilistic. I really want to believe Jesus has a six pack, but I'm not so sure. I mean it wouldn't make any difference, but maybe it would. You know?
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