Spiritual Journeys #2 |
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Dream Catcher |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada ![]() |
IF we can still wake up and gaze in childlike awe at clear blue skies, then run barefoot on sandy beach, unmindful of the cold of early morning spring, and soak our toes at water’s edge, shivering. IF we can listen to the crashing of the surf, the ceaseless call of hungry gulls as they fly low and not conjure emotions dark and boding ill. as we look up at sunlit clouds beyond the hill. IF we can stop to smell the roses freshly cut, then gorge in wonder at the riot of fall’s colors, as we walk through the woods, with spirits light and free, to catch the leaves as they drop softly off a tree. THEN WE shall fear no longer unseen terrors, wearing evil masks behind the faces they display, and we can watch our kids blow white fluff from the flowers to wish on, to dream on, to build their own life’s castle towers. [This message has been edited by jjote (03-26-2003 12:03 AM).] |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I love this. You have caught the very essence of what life is about. Joyce |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (tears fall down my cheeks) God Bless You, sweet Josefina, we all should treat each other like brothers and sisters as we all are sons and daughters of Him and if we can just love then all will be beautiful! (wipes tears) I keep praying for this special day of harmony, dearest friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Josefina, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is a wonderful write.....I had to vote!!!! Bridgette ![]() "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JJote~ Captivating title that pulled me into this beauty~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
WOW ~ You have summed it all up beautifully with this JJote ~ great write. Bonnie |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Thank you for the reminder we must continue to reach for dreams as lovely as these. Deb |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is SO very beautiful!! ~A hugs and a vote~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Oh, you've brought back a childhood memory with your poem here and I will need to do this again as soon as they come out... (YAY!!!) I used to make wishes upon a dandelion flower and then blow its seeds into the air. Your poem inspires such wonderful contemplations of being childlike again and gives your reader here if only a brief and needed moment, yet still a wonderful break, from the current and most tragic terror felt in our world and grown-up lives today. I like how you've mixed the best, I think, of two worlds here... the rhyming world and the free verse world. Good job. Very happy to see your name here again and to vote for your lovely poem. God bless. -Bob |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
I really don't know (to Bob)if I followed any kind of meter/rhyming pattern here - the words flew off their own accord (hehe) - couldn't stop them - so (shrugging), who's lookin'?? But thanks anyway for the helpful comments. Thanks also to the rest of you guys/gals for your votes and for reading. Just wish I could be here more often to read all your poems... |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is a beautiful poem. ![]() Ethel |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
This one is for sure for the book. A wonderful write and a wonderful way to remind us what is truely important. You have my vote for sure and I love the title. That is what drew me in to begin with. |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
How absolutely beautiful! I am sorry to be so late in finding your poem, as it truly was my loss. You have my vote. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Josefina, this is lovely... thank you for sharing such a treasure! |
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Street Heart Member
since 2002-09-05
Posts 349Pennsylvania,USA |
Josefina,this is one of the nicest and most relevant poems I have read.It puts many things into perspective,makes one wonder why there is such hatred and destruction,and burns all down into the simplicity of appreciation of the world and its peoples. Incredibly eloquent and true.This is most certainly receiving my vote and is being saved in my special "vault".Just beautiful. Peace On Earth,Geoffrey If a man has not discovered something he is willing to die for,his life is not worth living. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
jjote This is a must for the book. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
A beauty of spirit uplifting...thank you! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This is an absolutely beautiful reminder to take a moment to stop and appreciate the smaller things in life and a poignent reminder that the world is only what we make of it. Well deserving of print. Beautiful job ![]() |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
My vote is already in but I'm going to give this a little bump. It is so worthy. Joyce |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
jjote: A wonderful poem and carries a worthwile message, plus many beautiful images. Great job and it has my vote! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Yup, Mysteria is right. This belongs in the book. ![]() If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Important words for us all these days. Thanks. Sandra |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
*smiles* beautiful. Goes just right with my new and imporoved attitude on life. Thank you for the read ![]() |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wise verses! And so true. Much enjoyed and appreciated. Love, Margherita |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Josefina Your words spoke many truths and should definitely be included in the book. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
This is beautifully said. I happily cast my vote for this. |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Would love to read this beauty in the book ![]() Charisma |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
This a very good poem it gets my vote ![]() Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
![]() Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
I haven't here for days and miss you guys. I didn't realize such a lot of you have taken time to read this. Thanks again everybody, it's all been so worthwhile "sowing" my words to the wind. ![]() |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
Thank you everyone. I feel warm all over reading your appreciative words. |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
Just stopping by to thank all of you for your support and beautiful words. Luv y'all. |
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