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aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2002-10-30 04:00 PM

Sometimes I wish upon a star,
I dream to be strong.
I dream to achieve "plan A",
And I have "plan B"
But when the wind breezes,
I wonder what's my real needs.

Sometimes it's easier
To wish upon a star
Than to wash the dishes.
And when the morning comes,
I forget my promise;
So when the night comes,
There is a story of dishes!

Sometimes I wonder the reason
Of my standing in balcony
Remaining the same.
Always wishing someday I would change;
But the change is today,
When I decide to walk.

Walking along with the moon,
Sometimes I have to face against the wind.
Knowing wind is abstract,
I let go of my doubts and past.

Trying my best each day,
Relieve me from worries.

Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.

[This message has been edited by aries_luv_ppl (10-30-2002 04:08 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-10-30 04:14 PM

(sigh) Oh Eliza, I can understand this feeling ever so well, but know with all your heart that He has a plan for us all and as you come hurdling through those stacks of dishes, that star will be blinking! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

2 posted 2002-10-30 04:56 PM

It is wonderful Eliza how you try each day to write another poem and they get better all of the time. Love, Joyce

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

3 posted 2002-10-30 05:01 PM

thanks, joyce and noah. I surely hope i have improved each day

Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

4 posted 2002-10-31 02:18 AM

Dreaming and fantasizing are both a delightful part of real life my poet friend and I appreciate your sharing your dreams of "lessons from a star" with us here. I do believe in dreams and I do believe that dreams still come true... but, like you, I must admit that dreaming has never gotten the dishes washed. (smiles

) Good job and keep on dreaming.

-Bob

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

5 posted 2002-10-31 06:21 AM

Wonderful write Eliza. Our dreams and our faith is what keeps us going. Well done.

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

6 posted 2002-11-01 12:37 PM

Eliza: I always enjoy your poetry and it is very refreshing to read. Keep up the good work!

Betty Lou Hebert

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2002-11-01 07:57 PM

Eliza~
It's such a pleasure to read your poetic works~
You delight me~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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