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encycmet New Member
since 2003-03-20
Posts 8 |
TOMORROW You will never feel the four winds of tomorrow Cause you know sometimes words have No meaning And does anyone remember the laughter In your head you are humming And you will not know Dear lady can you face the window And see it so low And face the misty heaven's Four winds Cause you know I will see you tomorrow Again and again How can you when tomorrow Will never come around In your head you are scared But a flower, he blooms Dear lady can you feel the winds blow And see it so low And face the misty heaven's Four winds Cause if you start to see her suffer And cry And you don't know what to do But she will need your help To keep the tears burning Dear lady can you face the window And see it so low And face the misty heaven's Four winds And when you dig her name through the dirt Please remind her of when It should hurt And when she smiles Mouths drop away Please save her when she drowns And when she starts to come undone Please remind her of all The fun And to know the window never shone Why do the voices even bother The sun comes out All is fine The sun comes out We will shine Only she knows how to make the world glitter But not how we are all stone And to become a GODESS NOT A POSE And she is facing the misty heaven's Four winds |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Welcome to Passions! I really enjoyed this piece, how you speak of endurance and strength. I hope you enjoy it here! I'm sure I'll see more of your work soon!  PS.. check your email! Oh, make me Thine forever |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
OUTSTANDING! I love the imagery in this piece as much as the message, the depth of thought. Sure wish I could vote for it for the Reflections book. For now, I'll keep it safely tucked into my faves file. |
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encycmet New Member
since 2003-03-20
Posts 8 |
how do i let you vote? |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Yes, may she continue to follow her heart and believe she can become a goddess someday and not just another fashionable icon, this is a wonderful poem about perserverance and faith, God Bless You! (sigh) I too wish I could vote for this now, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton ***In order to make your post eligible to be voted on for Reflections, click the Edit icon on the toolbar above your poem (the third to the right), check-mark the box that you want this to be a submission fo Reflections, then Edit! ***"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Welcome to Passions and the Spiritual Journeys. It's great to have you share with us your talent and it's splendid to see the sun out and shining. Your described Goddess sounds wonderfully delightful. Full of light and full of intimate mental musings and imaginations that could most certainly brighten any tomorrow. For me, your poem emphasized a hunger and a deep love for the simple things in life. Yes, let her not forget the fun, the laughter, flowers... ...and the sun. God bless and again Welcome. -Bob |
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