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A Mother's Touch
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A Mother's Touch |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) 
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A Mother's Touch On a path filled with onlookers a man is forced to walk alone A crown of thorns on his brow shows his pain Human sins as a wooden cross weigh heavy on his back Dark clouds begin to gather for all to see the fate of a man who will die for you and me A mother laden with sorrow reaches out to comfort her son She knows his father will welcome him when his sacrifice is done Her touch is soft and gentle to his skin letting him know he is not the one who sinned |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Thank you for this exquisite write. My vote indeed. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is amazing...exquisitely penned and much enjoyed. ~Smiles, hugs and a vote~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This was so beautifully done, there isn't any way I could not vote for it, exquisite. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this made me cry as I know this story so well and I don't know the pain He must have went through but that he did it for us and he is now with Him forever! (wipes tears) This has my vote, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Thomas, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Yes indeed!!! Joyce |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Splendid, fabulous, YES!  |
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Whippoorwill Member
since 2003-03-12
Posts 60Arizona |
Hi, A timeless piece. A story of love and loyalty. Teaching wisdom. Thanks In the Spirit, Whippoorwill The breath of God and the breath of a human comingled creates holy poetry. |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Welcome to Spiritual Journeys and I think that your poem will make a welcome addition to the anthology. A wonderful tribute here written, I believe, in remembrance of Mother Mary and the ultimate sacrifice by the only One (Her Son) who ever lived free from sin and now offers a sin free life to us all through Him. Good job. -Bob |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
Just right for the Lenten season. Lest we forget His mother who suffered right beside Him in Calvary. And here's my vote, too. |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Thank all of you for your uplifting comments it is good to know there are people alike in this world and this webssite is a true testament of that |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
 Just bumping back tp the top. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is beautiful, Thomas. It has my vote. I acrually thought I already had. Sorry.  Hugs, Ethel |
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Flower Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 240California |
How on earth did I miss this one? I voted. Love reading all these great writes. |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
So glad this was bumped Thomas ~ Such a beautifully tender write indeed! Bonnie |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I'm definately voting for this..... Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Musicmaker1969
since 2000-06-25
Posts 589Peterborough, Ontario Canada |
Awesome! It is very vivid in description. I could actually see what you were writing. I'm sure He would be proud. Jesus lives in my heart! |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Thomas...A very touching heartfelt poem. Thank you for sharing...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You show your beautiful sensitive soul and I love your poem and vote for it. Love, Margherita |
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cupcake Member
since 2003-01-05
Posts 116 |
Wonderful, my vote is in. |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Just in here browsing and re-reading. |
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