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20toes
Junior Member
since 2009-07-26
Posts 42
AZ, USA

0 posted 2009-07-26 07:41 PM



Dear God I ask of you,
To keep my heart pure and true.
Dear God I ask of you,
To keep me safe in all that I do.
Dear God I ask of you,
To keep my views bright and new.
Dear God I ask of you,
To keep me smart and my mind on cue.

Dear God I ask that I,
Will always have the power to try.
Dear God I ask that I,
Can always smile even when I cry.
Dear God I ask that I,
Can be with you when I do die.
Dear God I ask that I,
Will be unknown to a lie.

Dear God what I really ask for,
Is that you always be there to open my door.

But now Dear God,
I truly must say,
Why it is I do pray.
That I learn to give and not just receive,
For my love you have had to fetch and retrieve.
Why is it I pray for my wants,
Instead of others needs,
As I bow down on my knees?
And then in tough times I wonder why,
Things don't happen the way I like.
Maybe others are out there now,
Praying like I pray.
For them alone,
What a cold empty world this has become.

For now I pray for others than me,
And soon I will see.
Life starts to change,
And my heart starts to grow,
For the true love of God I now know.

Never let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game.

© Copyright 2009 Beth Wright - All Rights Reserved
precious pearls
Member
since 2009-07-24
Posts 110
NJ; United States
1 posted 2009-07-27 09:50 PM


It was soo honest and true... I 2 hav trouble sometimes praying for others and saying thank you, i kno EXACTLY how you feel!!! I love how you put the words together, it fit the title PERFECTLY. Good job!
May God bless You..
Kai

sandgrain
Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
2 posted 2009-07-27 10:52 PM


What a grand entrance!  How easy it is to fall into the trap of praying for our wishes constantly.  A great reminder that God is our loving Father, not to be treated like a
a credit card or Genie.

God bless,
Rae

jjbreunig3
Member
since 2009-07-29
Posts 423
Maine, USA
3 posted 2009-07-29 10:33 AM


An enjoyable piece; we all must mature and learn to pray The Word is properly affect our lives and those around us; a great reminder. --Joe

Logic, when applied to people, fails miserably! --Joseph J. Breunig 3rd

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