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morcor0120ch New Member
since 2003-02-25
Posts 7 |
Undiscovered The sun streams through the branches, it’s bright rays blind the eyes, getting rid of all cares and obligations, setting free the already jovial spirit. Foot imprints are found on the once fresh snow, it’s shape leaving an everlasting mark on the vulnerable soil. Where the footsteps stop is where your journey begins, mind and body embark separately to seek it’s own metaphorical paradise. A stick lies above the pristine earth, it’s message of pureness echoes loud and true. The brown texture radiates, calming outside elements, halting the blistering wind. Sitting majestically off to the side is a rock. Engulfed in the cold, white snow it remains untouched, a fitting tribute to its noble purpose and just cause. Body and mind are now linked. With the journey now complete, the mind seeks further wisdom, the body, relaxed and warm, still awaits it’s legs to tread, inevitably leaving this heavenly abode. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Very interesting and welcome to our corner. Joyce |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! And here in this abode we are always free to express ourselves and He will always watch over us all as the heart is where much of these promises hold dear! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
W E L C O M E  I love nature poetry. You seem to have such a unity here with nature and your surroundings as you write this poem. For me, your poem was a wonderful little nature walk and a most pleasant calming rest from my day to day as you took us to the snow, the stick, the earth, the rock, and the unity of body, mind and soul. God bless. -Bob |
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