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"THE CRY OF A SON"
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"THE CRY OF A SON" |
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booky1940! Member
since 2009-04-16
Posts 136Canada 
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My Father oh my Father I don't want to work any harder My whole life is nothing but bother Yet I'll accept no other title rather Than a faithful son on whom you can rely I'm on my knees hear my cry Leave me not to struggle and die Hear me heavenly Father Move the line that borders Between Thee and me Why you've drawn such a line Could it be to cut me from Thy vine Consider and help me to get by I'm on my knees hear my cry Leave not to struggle and die Hear me my heavenly Father Must you not look farther You need to see my situation I'm like a ship in mid ocean In trouble with its sails I'm on my knees listen to my cry Leave me not to struggle and die Written by Clarence Prince (Booky1940) January 14, 2000 All rights reserved |
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Tom Zart Senior Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 682 |
Wonderful poem of the passion of faith. Tom Zart |
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jjbreunig3 Member
since 2009-07-29
Posts 423Maine, USA |
An enjoyable piece on a topics that is rarily written; can feel the emotion. --Joe PS The use of grammar can strengthen one's poetry, as well as place emphasis on one's words (without placing the onus on the reader). Logic, when applied to people, fails miserably! --Joseph J. Breunig 3rd |
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Bloodline Member
since 2009-05-23
Posts 236Oklahoma |
Our Father loves all his children and hears every prayer and answers every prayer, just as any parent he wants the best for his children, sometimes the answer is no, sometimes yes, sometimes not yet, sometimes maybe, all from love, Bloodline |
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zaaclindsay Member
since 2009-08-12
Posts 111Ottawa Ontario |
I'm going through one of those times right now. Thank you for this. zaac |
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