Spiritual Journeys #2 |
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The Storm |
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Encarta Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 101My homeland is not of the world |
While on my way to school today I saw a dark cloud that seemed to be spreading itself across the morning sky. It got me thinking, and inspired me to write this. It's not all that great. I think I have to work with the begining and the overall flow. The Storm by, James A storm comes To over come What the Lord has said Acting nice It laid the ice Making sure we slid Blamming Christ We rolled the dice But never will we win Because it lure us to forget the cure For the snake eyes of our sin It makes us blind To the divine Capturing our soul Shadowing our lives With endless lies It acomplishes it's only goal But we can be made to see And formed to be The children of the Lord And with the Lord by our side The storm will subside And our souls will be restored. "They do not love that do not show their love.”-Shakespeare |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
The cloud truly inspired you to a lovely poem. Joyce |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggsssssss) Oh James, this is so very true, sweet friend, and only until we embrace Him and judge Him trustworthy will all be rainbows everyday for us all! (sigh) We just need to trust, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
YAY!!! So glad to read another poem from you.... I love the quick snappy lines and the message here is awesome. Sometimes our best poems are the ones that we write the quickest before we have time to analyze, criticize, break them down and finally make a mess out of them. This is a Great poem. I agree with you and your poem that the endless lies of Satan are like a storm that clouds our minds from God's truth. I asked for a poem above in my post without realizing that you had already posted... WOW!!! Isn't God Good and FAST too. God bless and don't be a stranger... Stranger than me anyway. -Bob |
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Encarta Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 101My homeland is not of the world |
lol Thanks for the replies everyone. Yeah, isn't that like God. Faster than we could dream of, and surely greater too. May all your blessings outnumber the stars of the sky and the sands of the earth. God is with us always ![]() |
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