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A Welcome to Wings
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A Welcome to Wings |
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Poet4Christ Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 211Oklahoma City |
A Welcome to Wings I fade away in this silence time And stretch my distance from the quest I ponder your unseen realms aside Where wings of peace deliver rest Your souls are elevated gifts of light Your voices bestow his guiding will Oh, patrollers of my restless night Watch over and keep me still Divine protectors assigned and posted Please forgive my falling choices I pray that in this humble time of worship I will give cause for your lifting voices I fall uncovered to your open eyes And sense your presence stirring here Envelop me in your wings of warmth And give rest to this dying mind of fear Oh watchful treasures of grand design Help me release what I cannot control For I am weak within your shadows As I feel your warm hands upon my soul Timothy B. Work He that trusteth in his own heart is a fool: but whoso walketh wisely, he shall be delivered. Proverbs 28:26 |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Very nice Timothy. Nice start for my morning. Joyce |
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Poet4Christ Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 211Oklahoma City |
Thanx Joyce - God bless you |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
I like the total grandeur of your poem, but there is one aspect that spoke to me the most personally and that is the plurality of the watchful and participating beings. Your poem speaks to me way beyond what an episode of "X Files" might suggest..... We are not alone in a Big Way!!! (Amen) I like the words that you have chosen here and the way that you have chosen to placed those words in your poem. (Syntax) Again, very good writing. -Bob |
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Poet4Christ Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 211Oklahoma City |
Bob, you have no idea how you have made my day. My poetry is so personal and so much a part of myself, it is hard to let others see it. You make me glad that I have. The idea that someone else might be blessed by my own heart wrenching thoughts and emotions means so much. Thank you so much.. seriously. God bless you Bob |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Timothy: This is a fine poem. I'm glad I read it this morning, as it spoke to me in a special way. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Poet4Christ Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 211Oklahoma City |
Trillium- My day just keeps getting better. Thank you - Tim |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) I too love the way Robert put it, dearest friend, we are not alone at all, in fact, we are ALWAYS watched over and there is never a place we go without His presence not lurking! (smiles) Yay, I love this, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Timothy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Nice poem Tim, I'm new here and you folks are talented. |
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