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WisprWnd Junior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 34 |
My name is Crucifer. My father is dead. Of his own free will, he left me alone. Now I am left, to stare at the cold, cold world, and wonder why, My dad raised his arms and quit. Suffer daddy! look at your son! Alone and a bastard, unfit to survive. Daddy look at the pain that took place when you left me alone to pervert on the cross. And never you mind, in your heavenly bed, as your bastard is riddled with loss. And please don't look as I hit the bottom. Or as I condemn myself to abyss. For know it was worth it to teach me to worship myself, for my bible is a cold clenched fist. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I think not. Joyce |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
He rose again! And praise Him for that. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Poet4Christ Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 211Oklahoma City |
I will pray for you.. God bless you.. Tim |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
This is a good piece of writing. Regardless that it may not be agreeable with the majority as far as the view/content is concerned, it makes this reader think outside the box. And that is a good thing. *s When you think you have heard it all, |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
This is certainly an aggressive write and I hope it is but a 'write' and not the way you really feel. Regardless you have flipped a two-sided coin here for sure and making me see both sides can only make me very thankful that I see the beauty and glory of the Risen Christ. Thank you for the eye-opener this morning, I appreciate it. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) I too must say if this is how you really feel I do disagree with you, nevertheless you have an uncanny and wonderful talent at looking behind the box and in other ways and this deserves praise for how you do so! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira |
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WisprWnd Junior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 34 |
Thank you for the feedback... if you had any real feedback that is. I kinda beleive myself I kinda don't.. what you gonna do? |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-05-19
Posts 8669Michigan, US |
quote: WisprWnd, all of the feedback is real. You can agree with it or disagree, appreciate or ignore it, but please don't denigrate it by suggesting it is less than real. With several hundred new poems posted here each day, anyone who takes the time to respond to one of yours should be recognized for their time and effort. For those who are offended by the views expressed in this post, I applaud you for your forbearance. Your disagreement with the views was presented respectfully and does you credit. As Christians, we don't have to agree, but if we are to expect tolerance of our own religious views and differences, then we MUST be willing to extend at least the same (or greater) tolerance to others. Your examples speak more clearly than could any other opposition. |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
wispr, Though I am a christian, my writing is dark and cynical.I have been well recieved on the forums.The responses you have gotten are honest.If you truly want a home here then appreciate the people who take time to read your work, and read theirs.I can appreciate your write for what it is.It is decent work.Try reading the work of those who responded, they are all good poets with views as valid as yours. Jason |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
WW, Praise God he knew his son better than that. The price of sin is indeed huge. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
I agree with Poet4Christ  Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become Lots of Love Rita [This message has been edited by carol (04-19-2003 10:47 PM).] |
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Musicmaker1969
since 2000-06-25
Posts 589Peterborough, Ontario Canada |
I will pray for you as well. Only God can change hearts so black and cold. Very expressive, but not at all what I expected. Jesus lives in my heart! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I think this is an outcry for help, and Our Lord Jesus understands this surely and hears your prayer, for I think it's that. I join mine. God's infinite love resides within you, but if you deny His presence, His light cannot spread as it is meant to. Open your heart and listen. Love, Margherita |
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Purple Poet On Wheels Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 145Pittsburgh/Edinboro, PA |
WOW Sorta Reminds me of Robison Jeffers |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
You know you wanted to get into the book and you have got two in I believe but only if you go in and sign your contracts, they still show up as 'accept' you will lose your spot in the book if you don't get your contracts signed. Email a moderator to find out how it should be done, I would have emailed you but no email address in your profile. |
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