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droppinginsideout
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0 posted 2007-07-30 04:08 PM


If the world should crumble and fall
I'd hope that I'd have to do nothing at all.
No repenting for any sins
Because I lived my life only for Him.

If the world should crumble and fall
I'd wait til the end so I could stand in awe
Of the True Vine, the Living Water,
The Bread of Life, the Everlasting Father.

And if the world should crumble and fall
From Heavens light I would stand enthralled.
Finally seeing His Kingdom's beauty
The Pearly Gates opening, would amaze me truly.

new challenge: The last thing I would want to see

~Jamison~    "feeling sorrow for all the things u had to steal and borrow, bring back the dates we had b4 tomorrow"-red jumpsuit apparatus

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hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2007-07-31 12:52 PM


I liked this a lot. nice poem for the challenge.
Krysti.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

Lighthousebob
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2 posted 2007-07-31 01:10 PM


Jamison,

You've done good!!! I really enjoyed reading your poem and I enjoyed your small glimpses into the heavenly realm... and, yep, I do believe that I will truly be amazed to see them Pearly Gates open also.

Again, challenge well met and God bless.

-Bob

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