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Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
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0 posted 2007-07-30 01:53 PM




Sorry, Jamison, I mixed up the words from your requested first line a bit, but I do think that I still got the message across. Well, anyway, I hope I did and I do hope, also, that you and whoever else reads it will enjoy the poem.-Bob

Well Done

When He returns, I'd love to hear
Nothing more
spoke in my ear
Than this, “Well done my Faithful one
You lived your life, you loved my Son
And so loved Me and everyone
For I so loved the world I gave
His life for you that you’d be saved
And that is why you’re here today
To hear The Word and hear Him say—
Well Done!”

God bless,
Lighthouse Bob


Next challenge: "If the world should crumble and fall" ...



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droppinginsideout
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since 2006-08-04
Posts 54
TENN
1 posted 2007-07-30 03:42 PM


The order of the words didnt matter in this one. It was made into its own and might I say it came into its own beauty. Very nice write and I love the new challenge.

~Jamison~    "feeling sorrow for all the things u had to steal and borrow, bring back the dates we had b4 tomorrow"-red jumpsuit apparatus

sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
2 posted 2007-07-30 08:14 PM


Well done, Bob!

   Rae

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