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Lighthousebob
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0 posted 2007-07-28 01:48 PM



Most Longed to See

When Jesus comes, I long to see
Beyond the walls—Eternity
The golden streets, the gates of pearl
The purple shroud of God unfurled
Within the clouds, the trumpets blast
The Joys of Saints that lasts and lasts
The booming sounds of “Hallelu—”
As crowned, the Lamb, comes marching through
The purest city ever known
Where Love is seen as banner flown
From every heart that’s touched within
And cleansed deep down from pain and sin
And where my loved ones gone before
I’ll greet once more at Heaven’s door
And where the crowns placed on our heads
We’ll cast before His feet instead
Because that’s where they’re meant to be
When Jesus is most longed to see.



This poem was in response to my own challenge but, if you are interested in taking on a challenge, this challenge still stands that you write a poem that begins with the first line, “When Jesus comes, I long to see” and also leave a first line to challenge someone else.

God bless,
Lighthouse Bob




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hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2007-07-29 12:55 PM


Wow Bob you have done it again, captured me in your words.
Krysti

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

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2 posted 2007-07-29 10:29 PM


It will take some doing to come up with  match for your poetry, Bob.  This is wonderful.  Joyce
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