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hunnie_girl
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0 posted 2007-07-26 04:00 PM



Jesus is the answer,
when you need a shoulder,
he'll be there to warm your heat,
when you're getting colder,

Jesus is the answer,
when you are teaching right,
to the junkies and the homeless,
that are picking a fight,

Jesus is the answer,
when you can't take it anymore,
he'll always be there,
what more could you ask for,

My Challenge; You gave me life.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

© Copyright 2007 Krysti - All Rights Reserved
Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
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1 posted 2007-07-27 03:18 PM




Krysti,

Your poem was a Beautiful Beautiful poem and I thought that it surpassed the challenge exceedingly. I liked best your verses that talked about reaching out to the homeless and the junkies even though they may not be soooo accepting. Now, that's perseverance and giving love and hope to those who probably don’t feel a whole lot of love and hope in their lives for sure. Anyway, I loved your poem and I thank you (Thank You) for posting your challenge.

God bless,

-Bob



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