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Curse
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since 2007-05-23
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0 posted 2007-05-24 10:33 PM



Lord hear my cry the street where I lye has blood my veins dry.
Sorry we haven't spoke my faith was broke, sucked into the smoke carrying this guilt like a cloak.

Can you ever find me in this crooked path the devil guided the blind, a sheep left behind was weak in the mind.

You saved me once before, drowned on the river floor-earth grabbed my hand, I was young.. I understand.

As the pain consumes my mind I remember the lords love is my bind.

Than the walls contract, my cry," father save me" loud like thunder cracked.

Than silence.....I see a tear trickly down the reaper sickle-I'm getting forced threw a light the size of a nickle.

Smiling faces all around, they hand me to a woman weeping. Another chance to make a mends and hear this promise that I'm keeping.

Lord hear my cry this bed where I lye has blood  I'm alive. Never will I fight this battle without god's soul in my shadow.  


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sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
1 posted 2007-05-25 10:35 PM


I like this realization of our need for God.
Welcome to Passions.  

  Rae

moondogz
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since 2007-05-01
Posts 397
Great White North
2 posted 2007-06-03 09:35 PM


cool poem...got a nice beat to it..
why I'd say it even ROCKS.

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
3 posted 2007-06-05 02:26 PM



WOW!!!! That was quite the Experience!!!!

What I liked best about it was that you were given an opportunity to help yourself by helping another. That was Great!!!!

God bless and W E L C O M E.


-Bob



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